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Admiral
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![]() Topic: CHALLENGE 5/27/2013: 1-1Posted: 27 May 2013 at 12:00am |
CHALLENGE: 1-1Create your own interpretation of the iconic first level of Super Mario Bros. You can reinterpret it however you like, but the resemblance must be clear. Also, it should go without saying, but, no rips or edits. CHALLENGE RULES
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CHALLENGE VOTINGVote now for your favorite pixelart in this week's challenge!CHALLENGE AWARDSThe 1-1 pixel art challenge is complete and we have three new champions. This week's challenge awards go to the following pieces:Thanks so much to all who took the time to vote and participate in the challenge! moth mario by pmoth
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vampiducki
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 3:16am |
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WIP using altered DB 16 palette. It's still really rough, but any and all C&C is appreciated.
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RileyFiery
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 3:31am |
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That looks great. Could work on the very noticeable seam that runs through the ground tiles at the bottom. Make sure the pipe ends up in the same perspective as the bricks, same for ground.
Far better than what I whipped together quickly: ![]() |
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vampiducki
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 4:55am |
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You make some very good points. Thanks for the advice.
Updated! ![]() @RileyFiery I like your style. Very different from the aesthetic of the original Mario, but it keeps all the charm. Almost like Super Mario Bros. NES meets Super Mario World SNES. Edited by vampiducki - 27 May 2013 at 4:58am |
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 5:04am |
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@vampiducki, The font is killing it by being almost the same as the original.
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EZKOI
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 5:05am |
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Does it need to be based on tile maps as the original game or can it be a free pixel art illustration?
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 5:09am |
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'Create your own interpretation of the iconic first level of Super Mario Bros. You can reinterpret it however you like, but the resemblance must be clear.'
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vampiducki
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 6:27am |
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@jalonsoThanks for pointing that out. I was using something similar to the original just for a placeholder. That being said, since the level is up for interpretation, I think I'll spend some time thinking of ways to push the limits... are health bars going to far?
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RileyFiery
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 6:45am |
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Thank you for the compliment, but you blew me out of the water with your latest WIP. I love the lettering. The bushes seem to counter the 3D effect, at least to me, being in the center of the top of the tile like that.
Edited by RileyFiery - 27 May 2013 at 6:45am |
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r1k
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 8:02am |
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I wanted to do something a little different. Probably wont finish it though
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vampiducki
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 8:10am |
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@r1k Please finish that! It has such character!
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r1k
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 8:25am |
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thanks. Ill try to find the time. I have some pixel commissions to work on, and ussually after working on those I feel all pixeled out. Sketching this out was fun but the cleaning step just gets so tedious.
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RileyFiery
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 8:50am |
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I'm with Vamp on that one. You need to finish that r1k.
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Samiboula
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 9:48am |
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"You can reinterpret it however you like"
Hmm, I can't help trying something a little original. Hopefully this is allowed =P wip, 8 colours used so far
It's kind of as if you're looking from the castle at the end, the black box at the start will be Mario just haven't pixelled him yet. still a lot of work to do yet, that's just the concept down Edited by Samiboula - 27 May 2013 at 9:50am |
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Kanea2
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 10:27am |
![]() Early wip. ![]() Edit 1: Progess :D Edited by Kanea2 - 27 May 2013 at 5:04pm |
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crozier
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 11:45am |
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Great looking stuff so far!
I haven't done too much, but I think I'm going to do the part of the map with the stairs, gap you can fall down, and the pipe you come out of. Edited by crozier - 27 May 2013 at 11:47am |
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ultimaodin
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 12:36pm |
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I origionally misinterpreted the challenge and thought it was kind of like re-skinning. So I might see if I can do two entries, one the re-skin I'm working on now and the other which is basically me idea of Tim Burton meets mario.
First let's focus on this one. Haven't done much yet and the pipe is the current part in WIP: ![]() Again using my 16 colour pallet. |
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The world is but a shadow of emotion, cast in shades of grey.
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CraftyPixel
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 4:28pm |
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- Oh that's funny... was making tiles like this ( same exact thing ) a while back...
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Dyl
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![]() Posted: 27 May 2013 at 9:07pm |
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My entry so far!
![]() Also bonus gb version :P ![]() Edit: Full level O.o (Wip) ![]() Edited by Dyl - 27 May 2013 at 11:02pm |
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Numberplay
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:11am |
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You caught me by surprise there with your full level. I'm still laughing.
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crozier
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 8:02am |
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Dyl, I like your hills and mushrooms a lot. Good job!
There could be a little variety amongst your clouds and bushes. Perhaps a few similar, but different images, just to spice things up, you know? Also, don't forget about the star and 1 up! |
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EZKOI
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 10:53am |
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Really early work, hope i have time to finish, any advice or constructive critic?
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DawnBringer
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 11:40am |
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@r1k: That looks great, and it never quite occured to me just how well the gray and blue could work together as a background against the sky. Plz finish! :)
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DragonDePlatino
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 12:43pm |
Hmmm...not really sure what to think of this so far. It's still a WIP, and I plan on maybe adding some perspective, a background and a concept for the koopa (not sure what I'd say it is...maybe a gumdrop and peep or something?) I really don't like how this ending up turning out. I probably should have just stuck with 16x16 or 24x24 textures...any criticism on palette and whatnot is welcomed. Also, does anyone think this would qualify? Edited by DragonDePlatino - 28 May 2013 at 12:44pm |
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RileyFiery
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 2:39pm |
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Not too much changed, haven't had a lot of free time to sit and work on it. Changed the pipe and bricks. Added the hit block majiggy and finished the ground.
![]() This is a fun contest, but I don't think I'll be entering in the end. @Ezkoi, I like the character mate. |
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CraftyPixel
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 3:20pm |
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- Mine so far...
![]() May make different versions ? :I ... and @ Everyone - I really love seeing your styles! all look capable of being in a great game :D, please think of making a game people xD - Edited by CraftyPixel - 28 May 2013 at 3:52pm |
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DragonDePlatino
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 7:15pm |
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I'm just about finished with this...would like to move onto other projects and work now.
I'll make any tweaks anyone can suggest as appropriate. |
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Nevercreature
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![]() Posted: 28 May 2013 at 9:52pm |
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This challenge's going to be epic...
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Dyl
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![]() Posted: 29 May 2013 at 5:22am |
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Originally posted by crozier Dyl, I like your hills and mushrooms a lot. Good job! There could be a little variety amongst your clouds and bushes. Perhaps a few similar, but different images, just to spice things up, you know? Also, don't forget about the star and 1 up! I'll try, The clouds and bushes are all the same due to my laziness O.o. I'll probably fix them though. :P |
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 29 May 2013 at 12:21pm |
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Impressive entries this week :)
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Numberplay
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![]() Posted: 29 May 2013 at 1:17pm |
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So fun to see that much motivation for 1 competition.
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Motrox
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![]() Posted: 29 May 2013 at 4:19pm |
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This is a very fun challenge :)
I don't have much done because I've been slowly working on it. If you see anything that I could change please tell me!
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x-death
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![]() Posted: 29 May 2013 at 7:27pm |
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here are my thoughts on some of the peices ive seen so far.
CraftyPixel: (reply to your first post)
looks great but it seems really dark. id like to see you do a piece like that for this challenge. anyone else agree?
r1k:
you have to finish that piece. its awesome and it's very stylish! reminds me of a piece that Jinn did a while ago actually. its been ages since ive seen your work. i remember back at the GMC you were practically a legend.
ultimaodin: really like the slime coming out of pipe. and considering the odd use of colors on this, it turned out really good.
vampiducki:
i like this alot actually. although i think the bush look wierd were they are placed. i think they should be place to look behind the bricks. so place them above the brick tiles. also i think the pipe looks a little wierd as there is no thickness at all its paper thin. (or at least it seems that way)
also i dont think the healthbar is going to far, but personally speaking i would stuck with the score rather then the health bar. however you've managed to make the healthbar feel like it belongs there so it doesnt really matter. Edited by x-death - 29 May 2013 at 7:31pm |
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EZKOI
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 9:27am |
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Still working on it, taking a long time but, this challenge is amazing and the pieces look so good.Want to contribute.
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r1k
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 9:50am |
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that looks amazing. Personally I would just pump up the colors a little bit. Quick edit
![]() is the dithering neccesary, or did you run out of colors? EDIT: oops, didnt notice the extra space on the canvas, but dont feel like re-uploading. Edited by r1k - 30 May 2013 at 9:51am |
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EZKOI
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 9:56am |
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The colour i used for the dithering is actualy a different colour, i just tried to give a diferent texture to the clouds, but i´m going to try to just use it as a flat shadows. Probably it will look better. Thanks :)
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EZKOI
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 12:58pm |
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For today is enough, hard to keep it in 12 colours. Now just need a goomba and some retouching. (if there is no big mistake to change :) )
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Muxaun
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 1:09pm |
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Hello there!
Registered and read about this challenge just today. I am a beginner in Pixel graphics. So criticism is really appreciated. Here is a very rude sketch. There is lots of work to do. I prefer the idea of re-skinning the game. So I will try to keep initial dimensions and structure. It's hard to keep up with 13 colors. ![]() Edited by Muxaun - 30 May 2013 at 1:16pm |
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Muxaun
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 1:15pm |
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Originally posted by EZKOI
For today is enough, hard to keep it in 12 colours. Now just need a goomba and some retouching. (if there is no big mistake to change :) ) That looks awesome. But to be honest, colors of those cactus(or condom)-like things looked a lot better in the previous version. |
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Cammymoop
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 1:40pm |
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Well I wasn't sure if I was actually going to submit this to the contest, but it turned out nicer than I thought it would. So I think I'm going to submit it after all.
![]() I went with a sort of meta-pixely look Any suggestions/comments things to change? |
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DragonDePlatino
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 3:10pm |
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Hmm...the metapixel look doesn't look that great. When you're working with pixelart, you want all of the pixels to be the same size and aligned or you get an unsettling look...the small O's on the clouds, misalignment of the ? block and outlines on the boxes don't fit in well with the rest of the work...I suggest you halve the size of your pixels, work on that scale, then resize it back to what it is now.
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Muxaun
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 4:03pm |
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A little bit of progress.
Stuck with background and smoke. - they look bad ( Not happy with colors too.
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Cammymoop
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 4:22pm |
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Originally posted by DragonDePlatino Hmm...the metapixel look doesn't look that great. When you're working with pixelart, you want all of the pixels to be the same size and aligned or you get an unsettling look...the small O's on the clouds, misalignment of the ? block and outlines on the boxes don't fit in well with the rest of the work...I suggest you halve the size of your pixels, work on that scale, then resize it back to what it is now. Yeah I know it's all misaligned that is exactly what I was trying to do. In fact unsettling is what I was trying to do. With that said, ugly is not what I was going for and I realize that it isn't very good looking. Thanks for you're feedback anyway |
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CELS
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![]() Posted: 30 May 2013 at 9:05pm |
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Originally posted by EZKOI
For today is enough, hard to keep it in 12 colours. Now just need a goomba and some retouching. (if there is no big mistake to change :) )
This looks like a hybrid between Super Mario and Commander Keen 4. Which is cooler than an ice cream lasagne. It seems a bit too big though. And it looks weird to have Luigi so very detailed, and everything else so very plain. Hopefully, this is what you intended to work on. |
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TombReaper
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2013 at 10:21am |
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I'm working on reinterpreting this screen:
![]() This is my WIP: ![]() I want to make it sewer-ish. Any comments or critics are welcome |
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StoneStephenT
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2013 at 10:52am |
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@TombReaper: Wow, love the background idea. Fits well with the sewer pipe /underground motif of the original game.
Also, to everyone else: amazing work on your entries so far. I can’t even begin to decide which ones I’ll end up voting for this week. |
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Lehmure
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2013 at 8:26pm |
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Well, i don't know how to use 13 colors, but this is my wip now:
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IceyPinkLemons
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2013 at 9:33pm |
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Cammymoop
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2013 at 10:14pm |
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Taking a slightly different approach.
I'm liking this version better. ![]() |
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CraftyPixel
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![]() Posted: 31 May 2013 at 10:30pm |
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- Eh.... -
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