World View challenge

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Title: World View challenge
Pixel Artist: Corunder  (Level 3 Hatchikyu :: 623 points)
Posted: 3/13/2016 20:59
Palette: 17 colors
Statistics:  2 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

Well I got locked out of the challenge because the site glitched. But I guess I'll still try to submit it to the site.

This is my first time attempting to use titles and working with a image this big.  I think I grew a lot with this challenge and I would love some critique so that I can grow more.

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Corunder (Level 3 Hatchikyu) @ 3/24/2016 08:20

Thank you for your feedback.  I really do appreciate the critique.  My water tiles really do stick out and distract the eyes now that you mention it.  I wasnt really sure what to do for the small file when I was submitting it, so I just used the grass tile because it was small enough to fit.  What do people usually do to make another image for the preview?  I am not used to working with larger images.  And I havent worked much with tiles either. yea I didnt really make any transition tiles other than the road so thats where the boring squares with no shore or transition comes from.  Time was a large part of they lack of variety in tiles, since I was trying to finish the piece to be submitted on time, and I am pretty nooby and take a long time.  Since I didnt make the challenge anyway, maybe I will polish with your advice and make a more complete tile set whenI have some time.


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MadMage (Level 5 Lieutenant) @ 3/23/2016 05:45

Hope my critique can be constructive, as you said.

Well, it´s a shame your map didn´t make it to the challenge. If you had more time to work on it, I would reccomend:

a) Less contrast and maybe less texture on the water. It hurts the eye. I had the same problem with many pieces.

b) I really liked your trees and houses.

c) Maybe less contrast in the grass as well. And perhaps adding little detail added here and there, to look less copy-pasted?

d) Now, what really bugged me... You made an interesting shaped road. And yet, you made a square shore? A sandy line waving around the island would have made a beautiful beach surrounding the area! =)

e) Finally: a better and more interesting miniature. Your map is worth far more than a grassland square!


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