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I really like it, especially the thick outlines. On thing that tends to be a little bit jarring in the thing outermost outline on the arms, it seems to break the nice brush-stroke feel of the rest of the piece. It feels very painterly, and this looks overly mechanical. The other issue is that with a stroke that thin the jitter looks off especially on Gaara's left arm.
I also have to agree with the feeling that is is oekaki and it has some random elements that detract from the overall piece. But I think it is great work either way.