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I can't read the face, arms have too much contrast.
The trousers are good, and the shoes are very good.
I think that looks much better! It's not what I initially expected, but it feels like a facemask now and it's a cool-looking design.
The hair and trousers look good! The face mask still doesn't read very well to me, it seems to have its own lighting going on that's different from everything else, and the stripes(?) make it hard to read.
Your colour use here is much improved over your last two submissions, awesome! Good sense of form too, with those shadows. The hair feels a bit flat because you focused so much on shading the individual locks instead of the whole head, but everything else reads well.
I think the face mask(?) could use some lighting on it to show it curving around the face, otherwise it looks like a weirdly placed shadow or a beard.
The bright highlights going into the shadow along the folds look weird, I think you should "fade them off" by using the darker greens where the folds reach the shadows.
Hey there, Sorry for taking so long
i updated the face and arms colors, what do you think?