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Interesting blocky clusters o: Looks pretty cool with how they contrast from the more organic lineart.
Her skin looks very pink, like she has a sunburn D: I think it would benefit from being less pink/red. If it's meant to be pink-tinted by lighting, then the clothing should have a similar tint towards pink, but it doesn't.
Edit: Also, the rules say that works with solid backgrounds that aren't used for anything (such as for showing external AA) should generally be transparent.