I like the eye, but the white outline is bugging me to no end! Also I think the general shape of the eyelid (well at least, the shape of the eyelid-shaped mask around the eye) is wrong. It looks like it is twitching or something. Could be wrong though, maybe its really just the white outline.
I think the main problem is with the circles. Try to make them more like circles. The white highlight on the black area is a bit out-of-the-place also ...
the blue painting is fantastic, but u must improve theese circles, they are not perfect... and the white reflection, u shaded it a lot, it looks like a sphere... but i like it anyway 4/5
For some reason the white outline really distracts me from the rest of the image. Also, the shading on the reflection of the pupil. It's not a bad start, but there are too many things, for me, that make it just "good" and not "GREAT!" I still like it though, (or I wouldn't have commented on it.)
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