Your colors to me look too saturated and uneven. The two lighter shades of green on the hill are very similar, make them hardly discernable while the other green looks very dark (I suppose it's meant to represent woods ? Not sure of that tho)
The logos of IE and the trashbin on the upper left also blend too much with the saturated sky, making them not stand out. The clouds look maybe too shapeless and volumeless, maybe some shading could help (just look at pictures of clouds to see how the shades appear)
Your lines also appear to be very jaggy, making them look wonky and weird, and this jagginess looks unmastered and not on purpose (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gW1G_FLsuEs in this vid, Mort explains how to deal with jaggies in a great way it could help you).
That's kinda all I have to say, colors are the mort important thing you should consider to improve on imo. I wish you luck on your pixelart journey ! Have a nice day !
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Your colors to me look too saturated and uneven. The two lighter shades of green on the hill are very similar, make them hardly discernable while the other green looks very dark (I suppose it's meant to represent woods ? Not sure of that tho)
The logos of IE and the trashbin on the upper left also blend too much with the saturated sky, making them not stand out. The clouds look maybe too shapeless and volumeless, maybe some shading could help (just look at pictures of clouds to see how the shades appear)
Your lines also appear to be very jaggy, making them look wonky and weird, and this jagginess looks unmastered and not on purpose (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gW1G_FLsuEs in this vid, Mort explains how to deal with jaggies in a great way it could help you).
That's kinda all I have to say, colors are the mort important thing you should consider to improve on imo. I wish you luck on your pixelart journey ! Have a nice day !