Allright i re-submitted her, with the new shading and such. This will probably be the final, i might make some more small edits or add a better backround later so check back :). And yea colours reduced to 15 :)
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I'm in love! Very nice piece! Looks almost like an oil painting to me! Maybe the hair outline could be smoother, other than that no crit at all She's just beautiful!
Thats great crits B.O.B. I will fix up the hair, honestly i did it pretty fast, and i have not really learnt many techiques of making hair so i did what i could do. And yea thanks everyone :)
The B.O.B. (Level 11 Master Assassin) @ 12/2/2006 12:53
Well, if you guys ever noticed his previous attempt at this piece, you'll notice his dithering of her face had improved. At least in my opinion, her skin texture has vastly improved. I don't, however, like the brightest hue your using, the bright purple/blue, in her eye shadow. It seems to splotchy, like it shouldn't really be there. Also, her hair line tends to suffer from the random, dot thing also. I'm not saying you did everything randomly, it just looks as if thats how you did it. The texture of the hair could use a bit of tweaking, as it's looking a little bit rough at the moment. But judging from your avatar, I'm guessing thats the style you were going for, or at least thats how your eyes translate hair on to pixels? Either way, vast improvement on the original. Coming along quite swimmingly...
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