You got my vote from "I bet Charlie wouldn't suck this much. And the first dude's eyes lok agro, so that gets a point.
I saw this at Pixel-Art.org earlier but didn't have an account to comment on it. I used to name the FF characters after friends of mine too although I never told them about it :P
I really dig the art. Only thing that sticks out is the arms on the White Mage.