cleaning up the lineart (1 pixel width) would make it look much better. i'm assuming you intended its eyelids to be on bottom, which is cool. :x
i didn't really notice the mandibles were there infront of all those tentacles... perhaps give your lineart a color? eg: the tentacles would have a dark red outline, the head would have a darker brown outline.
the tentacles do infact look quite slippery, which is good, but there should probally be a definite light source, and it would reflect off of the tentacles in that direction...
the tentacle on the left, coming up like that, almost horizontally, stands out. perhaps toning that bugger down would fix that problem?
something that you could change that isn't wrong... you could perhaps have him floating during the whole sequence, slowly up and down? right now it kinda looks like he's pinned on a wall. XD
is it your first animation? it's not horrible, even if it isn't. keep at it! practice, practice, practice, is what they say when i ask where hollywood is...
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