hehe..

i like how nyanko's head is sticking out. i was having an idea and maybe you should just do something with only with nyanko. that would be pretty cool.

Colors are so messed up on my laptop, so no help with crit or anything. But...why is this so cute? Why?? XD

Yesh, adorable. :D

Please! Stop! You are spreading evil!!! Evil must be un-seen!
Next time, try to pull evil's head into the burger so when we look at the art work, we won't see it in so many of it's frames!  Chores! Evil ahead!!!

this is soo cute, love it!!!!!!! :)

As opposing opposites to FridayFrancis, I'm quite the carnivore, yet I find this equally as cute, heh. You've unified the enemy, Stacy3601...you should be proud.(though, I'd follow Lar's critique)

A bun should be shaded like a half-sphere. Similar to how you shaded the cat's ears.

This is very cute though. I, as a vegan, should find this disgusting but I love it. Haha.

thanks for the advice i will work on the next piece more before i submit it.  i guess it looks hurried  i'm not sure how a bun should be shaded though -_-"

Yes, that gradient isn't nice, is the light coming from the cat? It's a cute (if odd) concept though! You should look at how to show volume in objects (for example the bun part), using more contrasting colours (for example on the cheese) and you should make sure your shading and lightsourcing is correct, because for some reason atm on the lower bun the highlight is where the shadow should be. Good luck!

Surely this is worthy PJ!
However I would remove the gradient on top of the burger, its a bit unrealistic..