Whoa! Nice use of colors! I thought of making Gears of War too, but the insane details and many colors made me change the game. But you managed to make it look really really detailed and with only 30 colors for a mockup!
But there's something that bugs me... The locust (is that its name?) pose. It's not dynamic, see? Also, I think you could make their armor a bit bigger. They were like astrounauts suits for Fenix and Don XD
I don't think blood on them would be possibly practic to make in a gameplay, but it's still interesting :)
one of the top contenters in this challenge, though there are 2 things that bother me a bit (or i just don't get it right, whatever.. i just don't wanna wait for ilkke to start the flaming =)
first one is the wall on the right, whichs perspective totally confused me: is that guys ellbow a) extending into the wall or is it b) above its upper edge? - if b) then i don't quite get where the guy with the sickly skintone is standing on and then the width of the upper edge wouldn't fit the width of the pavement.. aaah!
second thing is that the pavement is quite narrow (the border between fore- and background feels like 1m behind my screen).. playing this would probably feel a bit claustophobic
The bald guy all the way to the right, however, looks like he's shooting a rock, and the trail of the bullet looks strange to me.
At least, that's what I see. I don't know if everybody looks at it the same way.