it doesn't look like her at allyou made her too quintesentially female
Good colors and I like the tatoos. However, with the odd, phallic-like object at her mouth, it looks like she's about to give a black dude with herpes some head. Also, the side of her face appears to be stiched to her shoulder.
You surely must add big blinking label on to this black thing, to clarify that is it, because first that I thought was same that people said before.
Actually, there is one more weird thing for me. I can't understand her pose. For me it looks like her neck is screwed or something, because of left shoulder.
big, black and whatever it is, it's safe to say that is has to do with some sort of cream.. d'oh =)