Haha, even if you try to draw yourself the image is still very Setzerstylish XD, just as all your faces

extreme asymmetry seems to be the biggest problem in your works thus far.  You've got the actual pixel work down, but these lopsided faces are hurting the quality.  The size of the facial features are also a bit large or exaggerated, but this may just be a stylistic choice.

Colors are better in the preview one.

This is a nice piece, but you can do better, I've seen it.

Sweet I like it :D