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try not to use my exact edit, cause I don't think you're allowed to but, use that kind of shape instead of a straight line for the stem, you could also make the leaf come out the front right instead of the back right
sorry for the extra crits but you have an 2 imperfect lines also on the bottom lines of the apple. This is hard to explain but this is fundimental part of it, when drawing curved lines, you should follow a pattern such as 3pixels,2pixels 1 pixels,2pixels, and so on. In your case, with the bottom of the apple it has a 10pixel line, from that line left it should go 2,2,2,1,1,1,1,2,2,3,3,3 and the same with the other side. Man, this is probably the longest comment I have left, lol.![]()
Well, if you want to keep it as is then that's fine, I'm only reccomending it to you that you make the stem wider at the end and fix the lines.