Thanks for the tips. I fixed her back and added more detail to the hair. (thanks Pawige)
The initial draft had more of the back. I think as I got down to the pixeling phase, her torso turned more to the side to see a few extra pixels of (cough) boob. Either that or I just forgot about it and when I thought I was done, the image overall looked fine to me. She's got alot of anatomically incorrect attributes, hence I enjoy the cartoony style.
Initial drawing: http://www.weeteequil.com/roughs/mdressrough.gif
Of course now that its been stated, its going to haunt me until I change it.
I really like this, but I think her back is pretty messed up, so I did a quick edit to see if I could figure out how to help it out. I'm no anatomy master by any means but hopefully this helps.
Is she B.Jenet?
Great work!