If it were up to me, it wouldn't have been allowed in. This needs a lot of work, and I haven't really seen any indication that you're seeking help to improve.
i don't think this should be allowed in the gallery in the first place... its one of those pices people later points when they are not allowed(as bad as that is)...
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If it were up to me, it wouldn't have been allowed in. This needs a lot of work, and I haven't really seen any indication that you're seeking help to improve.