ok, sugar coated msgs aside, you must be aware this is going to be rejected. and to add to that, i must tell you to go and learn some basic drawing skills(if the previous answer was no) in a piece of paper and then try to represent that on the screen, because you'll hardly have any luck by doing it on Mspaint with a mouse if you can hardly do it by hand on a paper. it sucks badly and it really looks like a joke, but its your first piece anyway.
Congrats on your first piece...
Right now, it looks very much like a work in progress which will make it difficult to get accepted into the gallery. So, maybe once the figure has a complete set of facial features, no white background, and just a sense of completion, then it will be accepted.
Have fun!
he also has no neck, and his head looks like its a little too far back in space. Also your guy is in 3/4 view, meaning the central line should be closer to the right side of his body here, you did this fin until you get to his pants which have the central line in the middle. Your lines are also pretty jaggy.
Also perhaps a nose and a mouth. Also some kind of holes in the ears would be dandy. What is he holding in his hand btw?
He has a Magic axe
Thanx for your comments !