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The face is kinda...meh.... You know... Weird... But the body is perrrrrrfect!
Since you're working on fleshtones, I won't comment on the anatomy. As far as the colors go, I think the skin highlight is a bit too bright (maybe bring down the red slightly) and the lack of shading to bring out the natural shapes make her look a bit flat. The left leg/buttock in particular suffer from this, but I think if you apply some of your midtones to 'flesh out' the shapes you'll have a very respectable piece of work (not that it isn't already good)!
I like all of the parts of the artwork! especially the bum though, that gets me, and the teets and the hair. but for some reason my favorite part is the heels. don't know why... 5 pts!
no big deal, don't mention it! :)
yeah, it does look better now, though you made her a little older than before. I you want to polish it further, I'd suggest raising the eyebrows/making her eyes bigger and cleaning the pixel-stuff all around the chin line (you know, just set up some subtle aa-pixels and get rid of the other ones -- make the chin more round(-ish) -- but don't push it too far, it's easy to lose control). that should do the trick. otherwise, it's still quite a nice picture, anyway.
looking forward to your next piece! I kinda dig this clean full-color-fill style, yet hope the next time you'll make use of some shading/paint-daubs techniques! comparing to the previous piece of yours, this one is a definite step forward -- keep on walking then! :)
Hahahaha even though that's rough, its way better!
I'll study your edit and fix this. I felt the face was wonky myself, but i wanted to get the body out of the way first.
Thank you.
Yeah, everything here is tits save the face. I made a quick and PRETTY ROUGH edit for you, just to show you what you may want to go with for the current face -- to make it more subtle and feminine:
http://jspade.republika.pl/chickfix.png
Please do something about it.
This is awesome! I think the face follows the style of the piece over all. Maybe adding some shadows would give it a boost though!
Nice TunderPhoenix quote. I don't see how the face looks masculine though. Maybe not very 'cute', but certainly not masculine.
The body is ok but the face is ...mmm, kinda masculine?!
Realistic.