Tooth Mouse

Tooth Mouse

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Tooth Mouse



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Title: Tooth Mouse
Pixel Artist: zch  (Level 4 Shoggoth (The Mountains of Madness) :: 5253 points)
Posted: 6/28/2009 01:14
Palette: 16 colors
Statistics:  11 comments    4 faves    0 avatars

For the weekly challenge

According to wikipedia tooth fairy is a mouse or rat in some countries...

Quick edit: added some shadows


Weekly Challenge: The Tooth FairyWeekly Challenge: The Tooth Fairy

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Manupix (Level 11 Godfather) @ 7/26/2009 10:52

This piece has a tremendous potential, please work on it some more!

Your main problem is light: the foreground and right side, being further from the light, should be much darker (and that would make it look more mysterious too); the parts nearest to the lamp (mostly wall) should be much brighter, almost washed out.

If that means anything to you, lighting is proportionnal to the square of distance. Twice further from light source = 4 times darker.

Also, teeth are not shiny plastic: they could use a little dithering.

Last, the cables and the slab (what is it?) they are coiled around could use redrawing.

Yeah, in France too, we used to put teeth under the pillow, for the 'petite souris' to come and swap them for a present. Maybe this is one of mine!


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orenshtiv (Level 7 Ichikyu) @ 7/8/2009 03:18

I voted for u....:D


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sharprm (Level 4 Deputy) @ 7/2/2009 04:14

Wow that is great! It looks like a 3d render cleaned up - I really like the volumes of the teeth and books. I think the black outline for the light bulb might be a bad move though.


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Pixel. (Level 1 Rookie) @ 6/28/2009 08:34

Nice Art, I wish I could do as good as that.


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RollerKingdom (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 6/28/2009 07:36

amazing!

i love this.. got my vote and fav'd


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TheManuz (Level 5 Killer Klown) @ 6/28/2009 07:08

 I confirm. I'm italian, and when i was young, my grandma told me to put my tooth under my pillow, so the tooth mouse will take it during the night, leaving money for it.

Nice drawing! I like it! It has a "childish" feeling, i think it's really nice!


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Celri (Level 4 Ensign) @ 6/28/2009 04:08

Amazing!  I adore the little mouse - well done


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Dirteater (Level 1 Private) @ 6/28/2009 03:36

Ahh dude you make some great stuff, "door to even deeper in hell" was my favourite. I recon if you polished this up youd be fighting the top guys :D Still great either way


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Official-NeoSoft (Level 5 Sniper) @ 6/28/2009 03:00

Nice idea, very original :D It got my vote ;)


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zch (Level 4 Shoggoth (The Mountains of Madness)) @ 6/28/2009 02:38

You are right. The bottom book was missing a shadow. I added it. Thank you :)

Still looks a bit weird. I kinda messed up the shape of that book... not going to fix it :P


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skamocore (Level 11 Dolphin) @ 6/28/2009 01:49

Wonderful scene, I didn't expect anything like this for the challenge. However, some of the lighting doesn't seem consistent with the lightsource, especially that bottom book. Regardless, this is a great piece =D

 


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