First off this is for a comic, so I can't change the time of day or whatever, and it's not supposed to be a masterpiece on it's own.
I really want some crits for this though, I want it to be the best it can.
The style I'm aiming for is a clean but smooth look, with kinda bright colors. Here's an example of what it would look like during the day: http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/6470/27188874.png I'm not really sure if this style has a name or whatever, but I hope you know what I mean. Kinda bright and happy. Which is kinda ironic since the theme of it is sadness, but w/e. I may make the colors slightly dull.
But tell me what you think in all aspects of it, I'm still willing to make changes, especially to get the style I want
Here's the forum post with some progress steps: http://pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=8736
you can post here or there
Hope you like, and crits are appreciated, especially from da pros ;D.
PS: don't tell me pokemon lay eggs, marowak doesn't
changes since post:
made back leg higher; repositioned bone;
added shadow under bone;
worked area under arm;