Commish ~ Yaneci DeNovi ~ Realismish ~ UPDATED

Commish ~ Yaneci DeNovi ~ Realismish ~ UPDATED

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Commish ~ Yaneci DeNovi ~ Realismish ~ UPDATED



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Title: Commish ~ Yaneci DeNovi ~ Realismish ~ UPDATED
Pixel Artist: heyy13  (Level 3 Private Eye :: 1185 points)
Posted: 7/16/2009 23:24
Palette: 20 colors
Statistics:  11 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

I was going for a childlike appearance but my mother think she looks like a teen. I'm not sure where i went wrong along the way. So any C+C in reguards to making it look more like a child would be loved. : )

 

EDIT: To make it more childlike. The preview is the same though. So you can compare. : )

 

EDITEDIT: Incorporated NaCl's comments in reguards to the nose and toned down the cheeks abit. I think it looks much better. : ) Thankyou!

 

Incorporated NaCl's second lot of comments, focusing on the mouth and the iris size and it's so much better i'm amazed. <3

 

EDITEDITEDIT:  Last edit i swear. The eyebrows and ears are changed. I've also changed the preview. If you want to look at previous versions i've uploaded a copy of my working space.

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heyy13 (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 7/17/2009 18:25

I changed my mind and tweaked the ears and eyebrows. : )


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heyy13 (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 7/17/2009 15:24

@ Sap & Roller ~ Thanks for the advice but i think i'm all edited out on this one. xD;; I'll apply it next time. : )

 

@ Perkele ~ It's supposed to be a little sun clip and thanks.


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RollerKingdom (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 7/17/2009 10:09

I really like it except the ears, like littlesapphire mentioned


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littlesapphire (Level 5 Rokkyu) @ 7/17/2009 10:02

Really cute!  I know you've been working on this piece a lot, but I do have a little advice to give.  The ears look very square and pretty unnatural.  Maybe round them off a little, make the top of the ear reaching out a little further than the bottom.  Otherwise, I think this is a really cute piece.


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Perkele (Level 4 Murderer) @ 7/17/2009 08:49

The flower (?) looks quite strange, otherwise a cute piece.


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heyy13 (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 7/17/2009 06:33

Thankyou so much for all your help. Your suggestions are golden. <3 I added a shade for the lips and managed to kill a shade in the skin so it evened out the colour count too. I hope you like the new version even more. : )

 

 

@ Photo ~ I have no idea who that is, but thanks. :D


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NaCl (Level 3 Hatchet Man) @ 7/17/2009 04:46

Man looks better. Maybe if you shaded the lips better and gave them a shine it would look better yet. Right now they are kind of like sasuages wrapped around her mouth hole.Real lips taper towards the tips on either end, they are not the same thickness all the way around. Also, in kids, their eyes are full grown yet the sockets are smaller so the iris takes up more space. Yours are almost totally exposed.

Keep up the good work


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Photocopier (Level 11 Godfather) @ 7/17/2009 04:38

looks like mel from fotc


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heyy13 (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 7/17/2009 03:55

Nevah will the dither die! xD Also it looked completely awful without the dither in my oppinion, though i understand where your coming from.

 

Thankyou for your advice on the nose. I hadn't noticed that untill you mentioned it. : )


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NaCl (Level 3 Hatchet Man) @ 7/17/2009 03:17

Children usually have less of a bridge on their nose (it is more, "button" like). In yours, the bridge of the nose is very prominent. I like the hair, but I think the cheeks are too much. Looks like a possessed doll that would murder you in your sleep.

Also, maybe if you got rid of the dither pattern the skin would look smoother.


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