needs more contrast, the luminance of the shading tones is almost same to the rest.... also... dont know if its intended, but theres some rly strange RGB distortion on the hair (if u look rly closely)... the violettish tone on the dark grey creates a kinda noise , there seem to be like 3 or 4 colors due to contradictive rgb values or something...strange
shading could be improved since it looks very flat now
is better now?