Girl's waist is too low, the neck is too high, forehead is too low, palms of hands are not defined.
Guy's neck is too high and too wide.
Find Drawing the Head and Figure by Jack Hamm somewhere, study it with pencil and paper - those problems will be in the past. It was recently published in Russia and many big bookstores have it:
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Most problems are with anatomy:
Girl's waist is too low, the neck is too high, forehead is too low, palms of hands are not defined.
Guy's neck is too high and too wide.
Find Drawing the Head and Figure by Jack Hamm somewhere, study it with pencil and paper - those problems will be in the past. It was recently published in Russia and many big bookstores have it:
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