Much better. Get rid of the green ribbon in the prev, foo' ;)
Wow thanks for that comment. Yeah that is a huge improvement. I did this one pretty fast so I'll edit everything now.
I agree with hatch about switching the bun and patty colors. I did a quick edit mainly switching the colors just to see how it would look
http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5930/slymedit.png
but otherwise I think it looks good.
I'm going to have to be a completely officious dick: this uses transparency for the rounded corners, which is not allowed in this week's challenge.. Please revise before the deadline.
Sorry :(
EDIT:also, I agree with Jeremy. Maybe it'd look better if you used the current bun colors for the patty and vice versa?
Oh darn it, I was going to do this!
Beat me to it, though! Nice pixling there.
I had to edit that twice, I got the wording so wrong XD