If it's too loud you're too old and the blood with flow through the streets of the non believers and all that stuff.
I think that you rely a little too much on black outlines. On many places (e.g. the broken guitar) a black line is placed where there should be a highlight. Black lines really make a pic feel heavy, try changing to a desaturated brown or blue and compare ;)
The rockpark is overkill.
You should place the OF in the middle and place the skulls around it.
Also i really like the bricks.
Also I would like to see you clean up some lines.
Anyway, Nice work!
Great job with the bricks, I noticed you added some perspective, looks osum :D
A praise for the god of Heavy metal....
This piece is cool :) but you can improve a bit the shadind of some parts like the Skull heads, and something strange is the variation in the saturation...
The guitars and the skulls are lively and the rest of scenery is less saturated (more tone of gray, making it less lively)
Try to make an balance in this :)
Love the scull heads ;)