Made it for dA ID. You can see my dA here: http://zedthemighty.deviantart.com/
Reference photo and WIP thread here: http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=10005
Ne znam...Jeli vrijedno...Ma što ja tu pričam? Shading nije neki.
Yeah... it did help a lot. The hair was a big problem for me and I completely did not know what to do with it , so i left it like it was at the beggining. I guess I am going to practice a lot more about the hair and the colors. Is there any tutorial or example on how to do hair?
I think the problem is the bad use of palette. http://yfrog.com/59zedeempalp You've got too much dark shades with very little difference between them. Most of your colors are in highlights. And on many places of the image there are no transitions between colors at all. Example: the hair http://yfrog.com/1gzedeemhairg
Hope i'm not telling bullshits and that it helped.
You mean the white thing? It's a line on the shirt. (see the reference).
Agree about hair and mouth :c
Everything else looks pretty good, but whats that tan thing on his shoulder? Is it a hand?
i think u shouldnt have dithered it ...the hair is very noisy. some parts, like the mouth and some lines on the fingers are too dark and therefore stand out too much, especially with the mouth it looks like its glued onto the face.