Yes your right I haven't found my style but I think I can promise that the next mokeup will be a step in the right direction and of course thanks for favo.
There are a lot of mixtures of styles, it seems like. The protagonist, the general foreground and enemies, and the background are each in their own style. Any one of the styles used could make a very pretty game, but they don't look that good mixed together. That said, though, I'd still play it, as in spite of its flaws it's still really intriguing. ;)
Now I work over similar work, I love similar things. The problem with a back to me is clear . In any case - respect.
Thanks for the comment, I will try harder at the next mokeup.
This still looks like it could be worked on, such as in the trees and mainly the backround...looks more like a WIP than a finished mockup
Other than that it looks pretty sweet.