1st Cliffs

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Title: 1st Cliffs
Pixel Artist: Ambross  (Level 1 Rookie :: 10 points)
Posted: 9/3/2010 02:49
Palette: 9 colors
Statistics:  8 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

I'm starting to work on a 2d game and decided to start out first with the cliffs. Critique and comments are welcome.

P.S. this is my first submition on here :)

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Hrunting (Level 2 Flatfoot) @ 9/3/2010 14:54

Excellent job with the dithering.  My only complaint would be that there needs to be a purple for the rock's shadow instead of a brown.


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Ambross (Level 1 Rookie) @ 9/3/2010 13:51

Well, the style of the game is supposed to be dark so that's why there isn't really any major highlights. Though I suppose I should add some. I agree with you all about the colors though. And when I first made the grass I didn't really like the style of it, but for some reason I stuck with it. I'll post an edited version by tomorrow :)


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ShadeTornado (Level 1 Gangster) @ 9/3/2010 13:50

 It looks nice, but (as said before), it lacks perspective. The grass looks like it was stuck onto the cliff =P. Nevertheless, the rocks look very good.


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Randommonkies (Level 6 Manager) @ 9/3/2010 12:26

I think the grass could be a lot more interesting. Try giving it some actual shapes and details.


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argh (Level 1 Private) @ 9/3/2010 10:52

 I like it!

The only thing I'm not 100% sure about is the dithering, but that depends on the overall style of the game I guess. And so do, IMO, the colors which seem a tad dull if you see the piece on its own, but might be just right as to not disturb when used as a background. Anyway, good work, I'd like to see more!  


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Theoden (Level 11 Special Agent) @ 9/3/2010 10:44

Nice, but more lively colors and contrast on the highlights and shadows will define more shapes I think.


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Kiwi (Level 4 Shichikyu) @ 9/3/2010 08:35

 ecluding colors choice, the biggest problem I see with this is perspective, I can't see it's a cliff, It looks more like spikes and grass in plain.

said so that rocks are good :0 I like them


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onek (Level 6 Hitman) @ 9/3/2010 03:06

the rocks look quite good, maybe they could more highlights...

grass is too noisy, why not tile it aswell?

my main problem is color.... its very dull and lacks contrast...try working on a 50% grey background that  helps a lot when it comes to proper contrast and coloring, also try hues shifting, meaning that u dont just use linear color ramps of one hue from dark to light but instead give the  shadows a blueish tint and highlight yellowish... or however u like it....

here an edit


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