have you ever used a kitchen knife as a weapon?

have you ever used a kitchen knife as a weapon?

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have you ever used a kitchen knife as a weapon?


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Title: have you ever used a kitchen knife as a weapon?
Pixel Artist: greengun  (Level 1 Gangster :: 459 points)
Posted: 9/21/2010 14:06
Statistics:  5 comments    1 faves    1 avatars

EDIT: hopefully third times the charm. i posted the before on the wip forum and tried to take some advice, i dunno how well i did, if this doesnt get it then i completely give up. lol.

well not completely. but with this fucking thing atleast.

murdermudermuder..part one of a series :) ill explain myself.

basically, i wrote a poem about "voices" in my head of course, and i'm gunna make one for all of them. They're all me, just different revisions i guess you could say. Theres the Serial Killer(her in the picture) theres gunna be the depressive, the sloon, the drug addict, the peace keeper, and whatever else i can decipher.

 

Thanks for any feedback, hopefully this one goes through.

enjoy..whoop whoop

 

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Sasajun (Level 1 Thug) @ 10/28/2010 09:14

Ah very nice! I like the shading on the jacket. The lip looks a tad swollen to me, but not to bad :) it came out very well!


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dpixel (Level 9 Vice President) @ 10/28/2010 07:38

I remember this.  Somewhat better.  I agree with cure about more contrast.

Here's the WIP thread:

http://www.pixeljoint.com/forum/forum_posts.asp?TID=11056


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cure (Level 11 Pixellite) @ 10/14/2010 16:15

the shades are too close together. you need brighter brights on the jacket, darker darks on the face. you barely see most of the shading at 1x. also there are just a lot of messy spots. what's with the random light grey lines in the hair? or the single pixels on the lock of hair hanging over her shoulder? or the light pixels on the left edge of the blade? from the eyes down the face doesn't make much sense, especially the jawline.

I don't see a thread in the WIP forum. If there is one you can bump it.


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greengun (Level 1 Gangster) @ 10/14/2010 15:43

Well, there actually is a wip thread for it. People commented on the anatomy, how she looks skinny and the size of her hair but those things were intended.

also, what do you mean by contrast? im pretty sure i understand but if you could explain that would be fantistic, then i can go work on it. thanks


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cure (Level 11 Pixellite) @ 10/14/2010 09:11

I still think the contrast (shading in general, even) and anatomy could use work

If it doesn't get through this time (or even if it does, really) I'd consider making a WIP thread for this.


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