The text and the "arms" are epic. The brown middle part looks a little plain. Maybe some dithering could help it look less like stripes. The top looks like it's at a different angle than the arms are, so it's a bit hard to read visually. I'm guessing that the viewer is looking down at a public recycle bin. Because of the harsh light coming from the top side of the screen, I initially thought I was looking up at a bin with the brown part on one side. Maybe giving us a subtle clue -- faintly showing some objects inside the bin through the holes would help.

I read Chenlus D:

Loved the palette, and how you used it to make the brown box and also the reflections on the title

WOW! 5/5

looks very epic, I have no rocks to throw, just whatever one throws when impressed... roses?

anyway, the previously mentioned text issues, since I read the title first, I knew what the text said and thus had no problem reading it, but I guess if this was a players first looks at the game they might think it said "Lhanlu 5".  I think just giving the i a little separation would help, evrerything else works well enough and is pretty enough to stay the way it is.

I hope this title screen fades in with some of that awesome SNES style flickery gradiation

Nice, agree with the comments about the logo.

Those motor things on his head are pretty cool! 

 the logotype is just awesome :D same as the colors you choice

its nice... cool colors... i agree with neocron about the text tho, mostly the 'I' wich looks like 'L'... maybe make it a small 'i' like with a dot yaknow? 

i like it but the writing "chanius" was hard to read for me....so 4/5