Smoothened the lines out a bit and tried AAing it =p not sure if it came out correctly as this is my first attempt at AA. Thanks for the advice! Hope you dont mind that i used some of the colors u used in the edit
its not perfect, but I made an edit for you to show how you could smooth the jagged lines a bit more and add AA if you wanted (though you would want to avoid the outer AA since you have a transparent background, I just put it in anyways)
http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/3079/mangostikedit.png
corrected the lines a bit and made it transparent, also removed the twisting thing. Theres still some time left to change things, gief more advice!
pixel tech could use some work but the idea's clever
just scrolled down to see r1k posted the exact same thing :P
that idea is pretty funny. Though the pixel work could be cleaned up; your lines are pretty jagged. Also, Im not sure that orange background is working out.
Wow I love the idea :) very clever