The wasteland woman Poster

The wasteland woman Poster

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The wasteland woman Poster



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Title: The wasteland woman Poster
Pixel Artist: RollerKingdom  (Level 7 Mass Murderer :: 8058 points)
Posted: 12/7/2010 20:25
Statistics:  9 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

 This is a poster for a competition, I still have to think of a short description for it but im super glad with the outcome after not pixeling for a while, and also would like to thanks everyone for the help with critics and opinions. 

Here's the work in progress:

i56.tinypic.com/mjbsj4.gif

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KrypToniTe (Level 5 Soldier) @ 12/10/2010 12:29

The depth is terrible, it looks like shes standing in some squareshaped ditch. Add some depth to it and it will make a great piecE!


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RollerKingdom (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 12/8/2010 14:33

 Thanks everyone for the comments..

@Delicious; yeah I believe could be the best piece or the second best..

@Cilein; thank you for the great critics


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Lucegydio (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/8/2010 11:13

 Muito bom, adorei os detalhes acho que ficou realmente realístico e perfeito


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Delicious (Level 9 Boss) @ 12/8/2010 08:40

Looks great, probably your best piece.

However, it still looks unfinished. I wish that the landscape had more depth to it.

Keep it up, though. :)


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danielsaa1997.ban. (Level 1 Rookie) @ 12/8/2010 07:18

 Luis por aqui. =D


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Cilein (Level 5 Irish Elk) @ 12/8/2010 05:56

It looks like a good start but some suggestions you might want to try out;

The composition is odd, the ground far away has a detailed texture but the rocks and river are bland. The girl in the foreground doesn't stand out much either, more saturated color or a dark outline would bring her off the backdrop and give the peice depth, an outline to the ledge she is standing on would help this also.

The title text is hard to read, a darker outline to it and a lighter color for the texture within it would be nice. The top right of the 'A' in your test has a really sharp corner you could smooth with at least 1 pixel to match teh rest of the font. Shifting the whole title 2pixels to the right would even it out some I reckon too.

The water texture cold use some work, it looks more like noise than water atm which is a shame with the nice orange ground tex beside it.

Anatomy - the girl suffers from it, her head is oddd looking, looks like she is looking off and up to the right - making the composition wierd as it suggests she is looking out to the left (body language and what else we see). Show some face if she is looking in line with her thigh. Upper legs are a bit long too, and the back is a straight line there. The shadow from that rock doesn't make sense either, getting thinner but not taking on the girls shadow.

Pardon the long-ness of that, it's a cool piece, just looks like a little more work would go a long way for you.


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RollerKingdom (Level 7 Mass Murderer) @ 12/8/2010 05:24

 Okay it's fixed.


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jeremy (Level 11 Sphinx) @ 12/8/2010 05:01

Preview >10kB, doesn't show up on the front page.


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luisniel (Level 5 Killer Klown) @ 12/7/2010 21:22

 Like it.


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