Bridge

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Title: Bridge
Pixel Artist: Jabber  (Level 3 Private Eye :: 2486 points)
Posted: 1/17/2011 19:54
Palette: 6 colors
Statistics:  9 comments    2 faves    0 avatars

Practice while my internet wasn't working. Critique would be helpful because I don't really know what I'm doing.

Thanks to Manupix for helping me make it look better.

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Mrmo Tarius (Level 10 Master Sniper) @ 3/25/2011 19:14

 I have noticed that if you cut their access to the 'Net, people tend to exhibit high levels of creativity :)

You managed a good deal of details for the dimensions, while still keeping to the minimalistic approach! And that's a good thing :D


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luisniel (Level 5 Killer Klown) @ 1/20/2011 15:54

Good job. I really enjoyed this.


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Theoden (Level 11 Special Agent) @ 1/19/2011 01:32

I really liked this one. I agree with ZeroSum, it reminds me the first Silent Hill intro :)


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ZeroSum (Level 5 Killer Klown) @ 1/18/2011 19:12

This reminds me of Silent Hill. Not sure why ;p


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jalonso (Level 11 Godfather) @ 1/18/2011 18:08

I find this a highly successful piece.


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Jabber (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 1/18/2011 17:40

Yeah, you're right. Thanks again.


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Manupix (Level 11 Godzilla) @ 1/18/2011 16:55

It does!

The arch is very thin now, it should be thickest at the ends; and it needs smoother AA esp on top.


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Jabber (Level 3 Private Eye) @ 1/18/2011 16:09

 Thanks for the help. Hopefully it looks much better now. I suppose this is what I get for not looking at any references.


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Manupix (Level 11 Godzilla) @ 1/18/2011 13:27

The bridge shape is wrong in several respects.

The arch curve could be more graceful, with either even curvature or slightly stronger at the top; with the arch ends either reaching deck level at the deck edges, or going down to the ground below the deck level (nicer).

The deck is too thick, as well as the connecting beams.

Nice dusk atmosphere, the car lights could reflect a bit off the nearest beam or two.

The sides are too random (both landscape and sky); suggesting silhouettes of trees or rocks or whatever could make it better.


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