FFSS Bird

FFSS Bird

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FFSS Bird



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Title: FFSS Bird
Pixel Artist: Hylst  (Level 3 Enforcer :: 1986 points)
Posted: 8/5/2011 09:49
Palette: 16 colors
Statistics:  6 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

Hello Again ! 


MAny pieces / bunches of pixs to submit since i discovered Pixel joint ! 

I like the spirit of this website / community, so let's participate !

320x200x16c among 512 done on ATARI STf with crack art in 2001

What do you think about this one ? Do not hesitate to post crits. Need it to evolve ;o)

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Hylst (Level 3 Enforcer) @ 8/13/2011 02:50

 lol  You're not wrong 


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TheoVision (Level 8 Regional Boss) @ 8/13/2011 01:48

What also might help is to lose some of the clouds. Now the opening in the clouds focus just under the back of the big bird (almost looks likes he is pooping in flight


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Hylst (Level 3 Enforcer) @ 8/13/2011 01:23

 Thank you =)

You're right about background too, it's very basic. I've not reserved high luminosity enoug coulour for making more shades on clouds, but i could have done better effects, & used dithering.

I've learned many things latest day by  looking at Cure's tutorial & many of the pixel art of the Gallery since i've discovered in Pixel Joint (better late than never =D).
My next pieces should technically improve.


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Delicious (Level 9 Boss) @ 8/13/2011 00:52

fyi = for your information.

This is really nice, though I agree on Cure's critic. Very flat. Also, the background doesn't look totally done, especially on the top left corner.

Keep it up!

 


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Hylst (Level 3 Enforcer) @ 8/5/2011 10:11

 Ok, no more post for this month.
fyi ?

You're right : it's very planar and it has proportion problem.
Head should be 1.5c bigger, corpse longer before the tail.
 


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cure (Level 11 Bonsai) @ 8/5/2011 09:54

just fyi, that might be enough submissions for now. we don't really allow bulk submissions (so as not to bury the queue), so if you submit too many we may end up sending them back temporarily just to clean out the queue.

the bird lacks volumes, feels very 2d. the body and talon also seem undersized compared to the head.


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