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Title: Attacking Cat
Pixel Artist: skyhawk  (Level 1 Rookie :: 9 points)
Posted: 8/31/2011 22:01
Statistics:  2 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

This is the Attacking animation of the main protagonist in my game Felinity. 

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skyhawk (Level 1 Rookie) @ 9/1/2011 12:47

 Here is an earlier version of it in game. http://hkasoftware.com/fileserve/Felinity/CatAttackInGame.mov

I really appreciate the well thought out and detailed feedback.


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showtime (Level 6 Made) @ 9/1/2011 12:07

I like the textures, but the attack doesn't feel very... attacky.  I really want to give you amazing advice, but I don't actually know much about animation, so it's hard to say anything more than "make the movement more xtreme lol".  I think you definitely need some kind of follow-through to the attack, though.  I'm not really sure why the cat's motion stops where it does. 

Also, it feels like a very slow attack.  I don't know if you've ever seen two cats fighting each other, but they don't move at that speed, I can tell you that much.  There's also a lot of cat body language to take into account.  When a cat is pissed off, their ears usually don't remain erect like they seem to be in this animation.

I think you might have made things hard for yourself by choosing a behind-the-protagonist viewpoint.  Cats have very expressive body language, a lot of which is hard to depict from behind.

I'm kind of confused by how the perspective would work in the game, do you have any mock-ups yet that demonstrate it?  Is the cat supposed to be walking forward?  Right now it kind of looks like it's taking a step up a set of stairs.

Anyway, I wasn't trying to be so negative, just trying to be helpful.  Please don't be offended by this comment!


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