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Beautifully atmospheric!
There are some inconsistencies in style and light between the different parts.
I think the pyramid might look better without outlines, since the main foreground focus doesn't have any.
The red moon being bright should cast some light or reflexions on these ruins.
The main issue would be the foreground light: I suppose it comes entirely from the torch? If so the colors are wrong (the torch is warm-colored, the light itself is cold). Also the stone shadows are too long.
The guy doesn't look like he's lit by the torch at all. There should be a lot of contrast on him.
Bienvenue sur PJ, j'attends la suite ;)
Ow I'm sorry, I clicked without reading 'submit for weekly challenge'. I didn't mean to. This piece was made like a month ago, and of course has a lot more than 32 colors.
Thanks for your comments, it's encouraging !
I tried to make the pyramid+red moon stand out, since it's his logo.
I do enjoy it, the pyramid and red moon catch my eye every time
Nice work, I like the lighting on the ground surrounding the character.
Not technically perfect but I love it, especially at 3X.
Clever iconography usage, colors and design. 108 colors is a bit much.
This reminds me of Space Quest IV. Well, the torch should be a laser gun (or a vacuum cleaner).
The pyramid and the red moon seem a little bland in comparison to the rest.
If it wasn't made in the week of the challenge, it's not valid for submission.
I think the moon needs some glow, and that glow should make the bloom effect around the pyramid.
I really like this piece, anyway. This reminds me Another World!