Inspired by this ( even colors! )
@orange08 - "superpower"
@Adcrusher534 - so your brother is Nate K? cool man! =)
I really don't know what all that green stuff is at the bottom left o_O
Ha my brother made that peice :P.
Anyway, I think the composition could use some work. Right now all of the action is in a perfect diagnol line across the screen. I think scattering the action a bit may of helped it a bit. Even still, it looks good. Good luck in the contest
sure I will do it ;) thanks for all.
The bottom figure is still quite messy. You have a couple of days, you can clean it up easy ;)