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Actually I think what I did wrong was make her thighs way too long
I drew over the figure and the upper arms and thighs seem to be the problem. I'm going to make an edit.
She seems to be a little pale (like she's wearing a white mask). I know it's the same base as her arms, but her face might need a bit more color.
Her arms look a little simetric, but I really enjoy her pose and expression.
Nice work.
Nice attempt, it is funny to see his clothes and colors in a piece that is yet so different! As stated before... oh nevermind, it is good anyway!
hmm she's like a human longcat .. ^^;
but yeah definetly syosa palette, wow.
( but yesh, seems a little cross eyed, too.. )
May just be me, but she appears rather cross-eyed.
edit: I don't think the torso is too long, if you look at where the waistband is, the proportions seem about right. I think the problem is that the head is way too small.
As said, the torso is too long, but you may be pleased to know that when I saw the preview, I totally forgot about the challenge and thought it was Syosa posting. Good work!
You've done a decent job figuring out how Syosa makes his palettes work. Also, I've seen enough Syosa imitations to know that it's not as simple of a style as he makes it look, so I get the impression that these personal changes you've made may have saved the piece. So, aside from the one glaring problem that everyone's already poked holes in, this looks like a job well done.
Her torso needs some significant shortenning. Otherwise this is very nice and captures Syosa's style reasonably well.
AA seems fine to me, and it's clear you're copying Syosa.
She seems a little s t r e t c h e d , though.
Perfect emulation for clothes style!