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surely entertaining, i hope you could refine your art a little more.it was a great piece.
Fun to watch! :D The perspective is off (foreshortening is missing). Other than that I can't say much, since I'm not really good myself, but I hope I could help anyway :)
The ability of animation is incredible. But being honest, it was just the animation that caught my attention because for the rest everything is very weak, since the lineart to colors, techniques and so on. An animation effort with the rest of pixel art (like the works of The BOB), would be much nicer.
@A2J2TIWARI Thanks!
@AngelOTG Thanks! Actually this is why I finally made an account here, there's still a couple of old sprites I have that I'd like to post here, and then focus on making new sprites and improving my pixeling and spriting skills!
Your animation skill is very good, but you should work on your spriting and overall pixeling ability now. :)
I like it.
What I've got to say is that the first girl who underarms, looks a bit stiff. And so does the last girl's.
Other than that, good job. 
I also agree with others. You are only weak in technique.