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Top Pixel Art - June 2012 (#9)
This is a very daring piece of yours (in a good way). It seems you challenged yourself to do something different, but still manage to keep true to your style and I like that! The final product of this piece really speaks for itself.
Really, great job, Jinn!
its clearly a good piece man, most people here pretty much love everything that you do, youre definitely doing something right!
http://spriteart.com/edit/jinn-edit1.png
disclaimer that im no expert when it comes to anatomy. ive failed enough times to know that even subtle things can make proper anatomical 'flow' feel 'off'. its pretty close to yours , but just trying to illustrate the shapes as best i can really to help myself also better understand the figures better.
Hopefully it illustrates what i meant about the back leg, as its sort of tedious to describe with words.
It seems that the girl in the foreground really has all her weight on that one leg, i think that other leg would probably be forced back into perspective a tad vs straight forward. its hard to say for sure without tryin to replicate that pose.
The spirit and overal composition of this is very good. just trying to help you see what i see is all.
I know this piece have problems, but wich doesn't? I'm human after all... ;)
@Faceless I don't really thing those hands/feet are chunky. To mee it feels natural, but I would appreciate to see an edit of how you'd think it would be better. Maybe you could show in it the rib cage thing too, cuz I honestly don't think it's wrong.
@st0ven Tell me what's going on with her leg, for me it's okay... o.õ" Maybe too dark? And about the glove, I tried lots of positions and this one was the one that looked better for me, maybe you can show me a better way to do this.
@All Thank you VERY much for the kind comments! ^^
i love the concept and all, but jinn, what is going on with purple hair girl's right leg? lol. Im goin to second basically what faceless comments on otherwise. Faceted shading style is good, it works really well in certain particular places to create crisp shapes. is the redhaired chick holding that glove? it would be a very awkward angle for the forearm if she were wearing it.
Feet and hands feel very chunky, and horizontal vizor lady's rib cage seems to bulge out too far. Otherwise very solid and great work as usual.
I like the way you cut the different hues against the very slim outline of their bodies and the sparse dithering. Works great. Couldn't you have given them somewhat sexier helmets :) Of course if it's DAFT, then it should be somewhat nerdy, I'd guess.
Uhm, is hard to say from where the ilumination is coming and the bodies seems to be out of the background since they doesn't receive any light from it (from the screen for example).
Im also trying to find where you put all the colors.
Beyond that this is a really great piece. I found the composition and stethic just magnificent.
ui , tu é safado em , só fica fazendo essas mulher pelada ai 
. E só mais uma coisa , o que é aquilo ali debaixo da mulher 
Nice work on the bodies, this works quite well and fits the spirit of the band.
As Schrumpkopf said, this is campy in a good way.
This is awesome! Absolutely love the shading on this and the little details like the painted toe nails. Stunning work as always <3
dude you are an amazing artist. every piece i look at is just mind boggling. Keep up the awesome work!