Before the AA and shading the mainly mistake you got there is the lighting/shadows.. You need to pay more attention to it, However i understand that double lighting could be confusing some times.
Besides that you got a really nice style and character there. The expresion give her some personality and life.
Well done.
You're right, Danori!! @_@ Sometimes I forget to AA things it's a terrible problem of mine!
The fork looks good and doesn't need an adjustment, neither does the hair. The other objects (mostly the cake and plate) look as if they are flat. Your shadows seem to be in the right places, but there needs to be a better shape to them, maybe dithering although you can do it without, and definitely more highlights.
I think the shading is fine, and I really like the style you achieved by not dithering that much.
Could use some nice AA, especially at the base of the cake.
Thank you! Do you have any idea what parts need more shading?
This is cute, but needs more shading. As it is, the lack of shading makes it look too flat.
I like how you did the hair on the gir.
And the girl in general. This is a very cute piece!
This is adorable! I love that the girl has gigantic eyebrows. XD