Make it look a little bit crumpled, and what sasuke91 has said. Also, like HeartOfGold said, the idea and design is good, keep working on it!
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I agree with sasuke91 , try a colour that is a bit darker and a little more into white . Though , I like the idea and the designe .
I want to make it more... "tasty" :) This colors looks good for me. Thank you :)
maybe color a bit too orange for an old look, but looks nice
smk, yes, you right see this my joke :)