Yeah, this was the only place I really wanted to fix, did this now. Old Version.

Her abdomens anatomy is weird.

Dig the mood  

Awesome, love colors and lightning

 The One Who Bites 

 The only thing bugging me about the edit are the more pronounced folds on her top, the more subtle ones in the previous version worked better imo.

Yeah, it's supposed to be the last meal, a dead human. Maybe not very readable.

I hope you don't mind that I uploaded an update.

 Awesome. Love the backlight effect.

 it's brilliant for 2 days work! I think there's a lot more to like about it than to critique, although maybe the chest size also puts me off a tad too :P The feathers and additional red light source are my favourites parts ^^

Very good work.

Is there something hiding by her hips? Some kind of creature?

Uhm, no. Anatomy is important if you want to improve. If it wasn't for Super17's understanding of anatomy, this piece wouldn't exist in its current form.

Hell, most amazing pieces here wouldn't be the same were it not for anatomy.

Is it really as overrated and stupid as you think? No, not at all.

More on topic: this is freaking gorgeous. Those eyes give me the creeps, too, which is a good thing, seeing as she's a blood-sucking monster.

anathomy issues...? WHO THE HELL CARES? This is a master piece, anathomy is overrated and stupid.

There are some issues and I'm aware of the most, but I will fix them after the challenge is over, so stay tuned.

And thanks for all the comments!

 Some of the things you could improve IMO

the cropping I did on the neck sucks and destoryed the face anatomy.

Lots of anatomy issues, but given it was a rush job it's very very impressive none-the-less. Congrats on first place, it's miles ahead of the competition.

Purty

 perfect. I love your style, congratulations!

hair are awesome

 Really like the details of hair's and feathers shading.

 Her top clings to the cleavage in an unrealistic way imo, no qualms other than that. Lighting looks great.

wow these colours work together amazingly

boob size kills it for me :/  Though what a killer piece!

 Trully exceptional anatomy and shading...so hawt! And creepy! 

Really digging the second light source. Would hate to get lured by this beauty in the forest.

 me like :D

Excelent work! 

Thanks guys and gals :)

Not exactly fond of the skin/boobs shading (that may be a personal opinion, tho), but this is stunning. Colors, backlightining, anatomy, hair... incredible piece of work, for something "rushed in two days". 

And "only" 14 colors... wow.

 :O

Nice. Good choice of colors.

Hot damn. Emphasis on the hot. Although considering she is a vampire, damn is appropriate too.

 oh wow, this is freaking awesome.

 you did it again.

Pretty. The eyes are creepy, probably because of the 0xFFFFFFFF.

this is HOT :)