He is showing his teeth, that might be unclear but he has some sort of grin with a gap in the middle.
Thanks anyway.
Ok. Now it fits perfectly.
By the way, nice suit.
And another rule was showing bare teeth, but yeah.
Looks great though :)
oh shi-
guess I'm out then. Or would it be ok to edit it (change the lighter tone for pure white) at this stage ?
Well... You haven't followed one of the main rules, using pure white...
Sorry, I read it as his lip! I tried and edit it in such a way that it would be more redible, but I figured I couldn't, you did the best that was possible at this size :)