The work was to a very dark saturation. You should put at least one highlight lighter in hair.The goal was to make the character sitting? as the "vision" is on top of the character, I think it should not show her thighs.
Inuyasha, I haven't seen much of him since my Myspace days when I was still learning to internet. You did a really good job with this one, particularily the hair.
Thank you Surn Thing, hair is one of my weaknesses and I wanted to see if I could pull it off correctly. Seems like it worked :)