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Like CraftyPixel said, the bottom is very empty. and I personally am not a huge fan of the grass, seems a bit too organized.
Color use is neat , though...
the bottom is very empty... The casket doesn't do much to help it.
I'd fix that ;) , good work overall.
@CraftyPixel, yep I'm working on a newer version, and will have it edited before the deadline. But, yeah I see what you are saying.
@Peytonisgreat, The grass was actually toned down(it was even more organized and attractive) earlier in the developement of this. Its tough to avoid clashing styles when you go into a piece without a plan XD
And thank you both for the critique. I will definantly work on this before tonight.
EDIT: Ok I edited the main image. It's much better in my opinion.