The portrait is nice... but the eyes are quite weird At least 2 more pixels (1 for each eyes, stretching the pupils above) would make a great diference: it would do justice to the rest of your work and also be closer to FFT style
something like that (also inverted the white of the eye) : www.pixenli.com/images/1364/1364150517000858400.png
Thank $ all the comments, I edited the eyes and put in the detailed version.. hope u guys like it now..