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Sorry if you miss something, do not know english, great critique, accepted everything as the skeleton, really wanted, that his legs stay bent back and twisted to give the impression that he was pulling the bag, I was wrong about that ...
Sorry mistakes in English
The atmosphere here is very good. Nice palette, although I wouldn't mind a little hue shifting, and a slightly brighter lightest tone. I love the background shapes!
There are problems too, the main one being this is WAY TOO BIG for accurate pixel-level control! There's almost 230,000 of them and each one deserves your attention. 150x150 max would have been more reasonable ;)
Composition is a bit flat, the witch is centered and on a line with the cave and skeleton. Mr Sk has anatomy issues: the pose of his legs mean his pelvis and lower back should be turned away from the viewer, or at least 3/4, not side view.
There's too much detail (noise) in the rocks about the cave. The brightest part could do with no detail at all.
That witch's upper arm is broken