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It's your best piece so far, and it's clear there was a lot of work in it. The shoulder/arm is especially lovely.
The only thing where there's evident room for improvement is hair.
Adam : Thank you for your advice. I overdithered mainly hair of the mother. Using less dithering seems to me too rough / simple too, it's kind of habit i have using restricted palette & number of colors that deserved me many times. I'll need to practice to evolve from that point of view too. Glad that you like the hue shift. About Anatomy, you right too, i tried many other lines but... this final result was the best i keeped :D
Brejan : Thanks a lot. She's holding a bestial like mask, kind of savage one.
I would advise taking back the dithering a bit (or a lot), and using a more welldefined light source. Try to avoid pillow shading. There are some anatomy issues too. The palette you used is rather interesting: the strange saturation gap has a certain mood I!m not sure how to feel about. I definiately like the hue shifts on the face though.
Amazing picture but it is not clear to me what she is holding against her eye.
Thanks :) A lot of work like you said =D
I'll have to draw less line art, place colours, light source and shadows BEFORE drawing each detail in line art.
That would make the whole more natural.